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Non – Chronological writing

by on Apr.29, 2013, under General News

Year 6 have written non-chronological reports about a made up animal – The Tongo Lizard.

Class 6a have used questions as sub-headings to give structure to our work. We have focused on complex sentences and adding extra information using subordinate clauses. Take a look at Ahmed and Kiran’s writing below. How could they have improved their work further? What have they done well?

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Narrative Writing

by on Apr.21, 2013, under General News

Last week in literacy we worked on our story writing skills. We used pictures as a starting point and tried to imagine that it was the first chapter in an exciting novel about a mysterious game. We studied the use of dialogue in a narrative and also how description can add to the atmosphere. We all ended our chapters on a cliffhanger to entice the reader to read on. Take a look at Ayla’s work below. How has she used description effectively? How does her use of vocabulary increase your understanding of what is happening?
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